5 Reasons How Adults Could Improve
(A Persuasive Report)
By Oska
I think that adults need to change ( a lot! )
Firstly everybody knows that parents hardly ever let you go on the computer so... we should be alowed on it more often.
Secondly surely you would agree that adults need to stop making too many rules. They make lots of rules about lots of stuff and why don't they follow them?
Thirdly of course you would agree that adults should not always be alowed to check their e-mails. Then they don't have good time with us.
Fourthly it's obvious that adults need to let you stay inside. why do we have to go outside while they stay inside and watch tv?
Lastly WE all know that adults keep on asking us things over and over again! ( This reminds me of my mum!)
So ... this clearly shows that adults really, really need to improve!
Kia ora Oska, I agree with your , third and fourth points as for your last point I think that as adults get older we ask the same things over and over because it is harder to remember things!
ReplyDeleteHi Oska,
ReplyDeleteYou make some valid points. Especially when you state that parents set rules but don't model these rules themselves.
Life I agree is sometimes unfair.
Hi Oska,
ReplyDeleteI am really persuaded that parents need to improve (HEAPS!)You had very nice arguments on how adults should improve.
Well Done.
Jennifer
Hi Oska,liked the reasons why adults could Inprove great job.
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