Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Some writing from Xavier

Jack and  Billy   went  to  the park. 

No  said  Billy.

I  can   hit   the   ball,  Dad said  to  Billy.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Xavier!

    I really enjoyed your writing. You had capital letters at the beginning of your sentences and you also remembered all your full stops! I also loved that you had dialogue - when characters talk! Well done.
    Lovely picture on Kid Pix as well. You chose nice bright colours that caught my eye!
    Keep writing. I want to read what Billy does next!