Far far away on a tropical island was an evil destroyer human being called Steve. There also lived some horrendously loud, calm and careful twin monsters Thing One and Thing Two.
Oh my goodness Shea. I am not sure to be scared or laugh! I love how your evil character is called Steve. It gives him a very ordinary, human quality! Well done.
You have a set the reader up to anticipate a battle between good and evil. I cannot wait to read more! I wonder who wins?
Oh my goodness Shea. I am not sure to be scared or laugh! I love how your evil character is called Steve. It gives him a very ordinary, human quality! Well done.
ReplyDeleteYou have a set the reader up to anticipate a battle between good and evil. I cannot wait to read more! I wonder who wins?
Keep writing!
Andrea