I really enjoyed your writing. You had capital letters at the beginning of your sentences and you also remembered all your full stops! I also loved that you had dialogue - when characters talk! Well done. Lovely picture on Kid Pix as well. You chose nice bright colours that caught my eye! Keep writing. I want to read what Billy does next!
Hi Xavier!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your writing. You had capital letters at the beginning of your sentences and you also remembered all your full stops! I also loved that you had dialogue - when characters talk! Well done.
Lovely picture on Kid Pix as well. You chose nice bright colours that caught my eye!
Keep writing. I want to read what Billy does next!
Andrea