The Beach
Shiver, shiver! In the weekend I went to the beach. It was really cold. Me and Grandmas friend were there. Swosh Swosh I dived into the sea . It was a nice and beautiful day. Then we went home to get my dads togs because we locked the door. We saw dads car come down. I run as fast as I could. I bet Dad’s car. Dad put his togs on. Then we were off. I hoped into the sea again. Cannonball!
Splash! “That was really cool’’ I yelled. Next Dad threw me and he made me do a bellyflop. “Ouch that hurt’’ I said. After that we all headed for home. Lastly we had some cookies and a milo. Me and grandma made a milkshake together. It was a really fun and exciting day.
By Kalia
Hi Kalia,
ReplyDeletethat must of been a really exciting day!But having to do a bellyflop had to hurt,alot!
I just wonder,what beach did you go to exactly?!?!
Jennifer
Hi Kalia,
ReplyDeleteI love swimming in the surf. An excellent piece of writing.
Kia ora Kalia,
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting day at the beach you had - always good to end a day in the sun with a cold milkshake1