Thursday, 16 February 2012

Alfa's Recount

Last Friday
In the afternoon on Friday me and my sister and uncle went to Grey Lynn School. We played cricket first. I was batting first. Then it was my sister’s turn. My sister got a home run. Then we went to the shops. We got lollies. Then we went home. My sister took my lolly so we had to go back to the shops.
By Alfa    



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4 comments:

  1. Ruth16 February 2012 at 7:41 pm

    Hi Alfa,

    I remember my big sister taking lollies off me when I was a kid too!!
    Playing cricket is a great way spend a Friday afternoon, what fun.

    I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing.

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  2. Jennifer19 February 2012 at 1:24 pm

    Hi Alfa,

    looks like you had a great time!Apart from when your sister was taking your lollies of you,that may be was'nt the highlight!

    I cant wait to see more brilliant work!
    Jennifer

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  3. Salote21 February 2012 at 12:22 pm

    Hi Alfa,

    I really love your recount. And I did'nt take your lollies
    so don't tell lies Alfa.

    Keep up the good work brother.

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  4. Christina21 February 2012 at 12:45 pm

    Hi Alfa

    your recount sounds cool and keep up the great work

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